Creature Feature - Last Part

CREATURE FEATURE

= LAST PART =

It's HALLOWEEN!!! the day that we Succubus always looking forward to, since it would be the night where we hunt together and share our victims together! But why don't I feel the spirit of Halloween today? I have decorated our cave with skeletons of the men we've killed, but still I'm not feeling happy. My body is too weak cause I've been man-fasting for the whole week now ever since I met that guy....yes, Russel is the name of that guy and I just couldn't get him out of my mind. Even though his face is different, but he reminded me of the peasant I used to love back then when I was still a young girl with love, with hope and with future.

Last week, when I captured Russel to dance in the cemetery with me and my friends there, I just couldn't kill him...am I falling in love with him? but how come a Succubus like me could feel love? a Succubus like me could only know to feel lust and passion but not love! And he...he even wanted to get into deeper relationship with me? I...I just couldn't do that, I couldn't draw his life energy out of him. So one day, I told him who I really was by showing him my Succubus form. As I expected he was really shocked when he learned the truth about me, I even told him everything about me, from what I do for a living, where do I live and what I was about to do to him back there at the cemetery. And it's been a week now since my confession, I didn't hear anything from him and I didn't even want to stalk him anymore and it's gonna make things worse....oh what is happening to me? is it the end for me just because I fall in love to a human male???



Russel hid the gun beneath his trousers as he got dressed. For the whole week, he couldn't get Deborah's image out of his mind. He didn't care whether it's because of love or her dark charm, but he knew one thing for sure, he needed to find Deborah wherever she is. Deborah told him about the cave where she and her succubus friends lived, so as a precaution, he decided to bring the gun with him just in case.

A couple of hours later, Russel finally arrived at the weird looking cave. He was kinda scared actually, but the thought that he could meet with Deborah pump his adrenaline inside his body. When he entered the cave finally, he's suddenly surrounded by three beautiful yet dangerous Succubus.

"Well....well...well...look what we've got here...a Handsome Sssstranger, hmmm...yummmy!!!" a black-haired blue Succubus hissed.

"Ehmm...excuse me, but is it true that Deborah lives here?" Russel tried to stay calm but he could sense fear in his own voice.

"And who could you be handssssssome?" a blonde pink Succubus hissed.

"I...I'm Russel" Russel answered.

"Oh ssso you're the man who made Deborah lost her appetite to hunt together with ussss....now I could ssssee why ssshe's so deeply in love with you...." a brunette yellow Succubus hissed while admiring Russel's body.

"And Russsssel right? how about we give an offer that you couldn't refusssssssse?" the blue succubus asked.

"And what would it be?" Russel asked shyly.

"You forget about the ugly Deborah, and in return you could 'play' with usssssssss" the pink succubus hissed seductively.

"True...my name is Aurell, and if you're an odipus complex, mama could give you a ride you won't forget...." Aurell ( yellow succubus ) hissed.

"Or...if you're into sssschool girl, then Candy is your girl since I'm the cutest one here......" Candy ( pink succubus ) hissed with her innocent voice.

"And if you like to be dominated, then Madam Belinda issss ready to punish you my sssslave!" Belinda ( blue succubus ) hissed while licking her lips.

"Thank you Ladies...but I think I'll pass, I'm only looking for Deborah here...." Russel refused the offer kindly.

"WHAT?!!! HOW DARE YOU REJECTING USSSSSSS? do you know that you would be the firssssst guy to ever have the gut to reject usssss!!!" Belinda hissed with anger now.

"That is why, he's the man that I won't give to the ones like you girls!" Deborah showed up suddenly. A glimpse of happiness can be seen from Russel's eyes when he spotted the woman he's been longing for....


"Oh Deborah, don't be like that, we always sssshare our prey right? bessssides it's Halloween Night, and I ssssay how about we sssssshare him together!!!" Aurell hissed and still couldn't take her eyes off Russel.

"No way girls!!! Russel what are you doing here? you could get yourself killed by just being here you know?!" Deborah asked even though she's so happy deep down inside.

"Deborah I've had a lot of thinking since our last meeting, and I gotta say, that I don't care whether you are a Succubus or not, all I know that I want to spend the rest of my life with you even though I must die in order just to be by your side. You could suck me dry to death or you could do anything to me...I don't care!!! I just know that you're gonna be the love of my life from the moment you captured me and brought me to the cemetery!" Russel who was blinded by love confessed his true feelings.

"Ooohhh ssssso ssssssweet which makesss him officialy our MAIN DISH for tonight!!!!" Belinda grinned wickedly.

"No girls....stay away from him or....." Deborah now stood between Russel and those 3 succubuses.

"Or what....??? do you think we don't know that you're sssso weak right now from all your man-fasting crap, and with the three of usssss, I'm sure we could just take you just like that!!!" Candy said with her not-so-innocent voice anymore.

"RUSSEL....RUNNNNNN!!!!!!!" Deborah took Russel's hand and they ran away from the cave!



"Ladiessss...let'sss play a GAME! Whoever getsss them firsssst, sssshe could get her firssssst turn on sssssucking the energy out of him....so let'sss get the party SSSSSTARTED!!!" Belinda hissed as the three bitchy succubus flew out of the cave to hunt for both Deborah and Russel.

As Deborah and Russel were running through the woods, Russel couldn't help but notice that his lover isn't looking so well, so he told her to stop and "Deborah are you ok? is it true that you're doing a man-fast or something?" Russel asked with concern. Deborah nodded weakly. "Then...just suck my energy Deborah....suck it!" Russel offered himself. "No...Russel, that's one thing that I would never do to you....let's go before they arrive here" Deborah said as she pulled Russel's hand to run again when "HHHHHIIIIIIISSSSSSSS!!!!" Belinda landed in front of them with hungry expression on her face while "Gotcha handsome!!!" Candy landed her claws on Russel's shoulders!!!

"Get your hands off him b*tch!!!" Deborah clawed Candy's face, she knew Candy is the dandiest among them, so when it comes to fight, always aim for her face! Candy screamed in distress afraid that there's gonna be a scar on her face. But poor Deborah, she could do nothing when Belinda dug her nails into her chest! 

Deborah screamed out lout as she collapsed with blood all over the ground! When Russel saw it, he felt the urge of anger inside him, as he pulled out the gun that he hid beneath his trousers, aimed at Belinda and "BANG!!!" pulled the trigger. Belinda was so shocked as she saw blood was coming out of the hole on her chest from the gunshot. As Belinda fell to the ground and died immediately, Candy and Aurell flew away before Russel decided to shoot them too.....

"No...Deborah...no...don't you dare leave me!" Russel shouted as he kneeled beside Deborah and put her in his arms. "Russel...I...I'm sorry....." tears running down Deborah's cheeks. "No Deborah! don't you dare leaving me before I show you a place where I planned to go with you tonight" Russel said that loudly. "Then take me there....." Deborah smiled weakly.

"See this place? Look at the crowd over there Deborah, this is the place where we could attend the Halloween Party and you could be yourself without having to disguise in your human form, and then maybe even for a night, you'll get to feel how does it feel to be who you really are. When you told me about your previous life, I thought what the heck, tonight I'll dress as a Peasant and you could be a Succubus right???" Russel smiled as he looked at Deborah in his arms but his smile vanished immediately as he knew that Deborah was gone....yes, she was gone before he could show her the place where she could relive her dream to become that girl she was before...the girl with love, with hope and with future......



The next morning, Deborah's lifeless body had been laid on the ground. Her hair had turned from bright red to shining white. Her wings were not even there anymore, it was so astonishing how fast her body decomposed. Russel looked at Deborah's body as he placed a white rose on her chest. The body was still hot a couple of hours before but now it's cold as an ice. Even Russel felt cold and full of sorrow that morning, he had lost his will to live when Deborah passed away. "Don't worry Deborah, I'll join you pretty soon!" he whispered to Deborah's ear as if she could hear him, Russel thought that he might have lost his mind, but he couldn't care less, and that's when he reached the gun that he used a night before to kill Belinda.

He took a final glance of Deborah's lifeless body, "Soon Deborah...soon, and nothing could separate us from now on...." Russel lifted his hand and pointed the gun at his forehead and "BANG!!!"

the end?

Sometime in the future,

I ran through a dark forest with sweat all over my face, I couldn't stop myself but kept looking behind me trying to spot someone or something who was chasing me. I just kept on running...and running...until my feet couldn't run anymore so I stopped at the nearby tree. I looked behind me but there was nothing there, and just when I was about to run again, something GRABBED me from behind!!!

"NOOOOO.....!!!" I woke up from my nightmare in the middle of the night. "Deborah, are you okay?" I looked at him and I saw Russel. "Russel? how can you be here? and where are we?" I asked as I didn't recognize where were we. "Deborah, did you forget? we're married already, like I said before NOTHING could separate us from now on, I would do ANYTHING for us to be together...." Russel smiled and there's something in his smile that scared me. I tried to remember where was I before, and all I could remember that I was a Succubus, I looked down at my body but it was normal. I sighed in relief for I wasn't a Succubus anymore, but still there's something not right about my body nor Russel's body as I looked at him again.

"Listen dear, how about we grabbed you a drink, you always enjoy our 'little snack' in the middle of the night" Russel smiled and I swore I could see something in his eyes, like a red spark or something like that. I nodded as he guided me to leave our bedroom, we passed a big mirror, and that's when I noticed something, I told him to stop for a while and went back to see my reflection through the mirror and that was it....that's when I found out WHAT KIND OF CREATURE WE ARE........!!!

I started my story with an old saying of a broken-heart man, and I'm gonna end it with a new saying from me :

"Never ever believe in men
Especially the hot ones
'Cause the hotter they are
The more dangerous they could lure you into...."

Do you believe it? maybe you will? maybe you won't?
but one thing for sure, beware for WE might be inside your house in the middle of the night
we might be under your bed, we might be in the basement or in the attic or we might be just right behind the door
just prepare yourself, cause you might see us one day!!!
( HEE...HEE....HEE...HEE...HEE )

THE END