Thursday, July 23, 2009

Creature Feature Part I

Round 1
= Deborah Darkholmes =


"Never ever believe in women
Especially the pretty ones
'Cause the prettier they are
The more dangerous they've become..."

Yes, that was an old saying from a broken-heart man, do you believe it? well if you don't, after reading my story...you will!!!



Back when I was alive, I was this beautiful young lady that everyman would love just to see me give them a smile. I was this girl with love, with hope and with future. One day, I met this peasant who was passing by my village, I could still remember, when I first saw him, under the tree with me walking by in front of him. He quickly asked for my name and praised that I was the most beautiful girl he's ever seen. Of course I didn't believe him just like that, 'cause my mom always told me not to talk with strangers easily. When I told him that I don't like talking with strangers, he introduced himself and told me everything about him so that I wouldn't consider him as a stranger anymore. And thus, I know all about him, he came from a quite far village from mine, he was forced by his family to marry this girl that he didn't love, so he ran away, and he also told me, that now he has found the girl that he wanted to marry with, and that girl turned out to be me! 

I was flattered by this handsome stranger and I told him that it would impossible for a guy who wanted to marry a girl that he just met for 5 minutes ago. But he said if I don't believe him, he wanted me to take him to my parents so that he could talk about his proposal. After meeting with him, my parents agreed to get us married with one condition. He must stay in our village for a couple of months, for my parents wanted to know about him more, the man who wanted to marry their daughter. 

He agreed, and for a few months, it was the most beautiful memory in my life, he showed me a lot of things from hunting, fishing, gardening, and many other activities that he has mastered. Until one day, when my father told me that I couldn't marry him because there's this old man that my family owed him so much, they couldn't afford to pay all their debts but to sacrifice me to become that old man's wife!

Of course I refused that, I ran away from home to meet the peasant, I told him that if he loves me just take me away from this village, we could elope together. He agreed, he told me to get back to my house, wait until midnight, and then he would pick me up. That night, I waited for him, but he NEVER showed up. The next morning, I found out that the peasant, my first love, the love of my life was found DEAD near my house, stabbed in his stomach three times and was left bleed to death! From that moment on, I was this girl with no love, with no hope and with no future!

Later, I have no other way but to marry that old pervert! And soon I became a desperate housewife, I couldn't find happiness in my marriage, so I started to look for it from others....other men!!! Until one day, when I was doing my husband's son with his first wife, we were busted!!! My old husband just couldn't take it, and later he was found dead, he hang himself at our barn!



My husband's son was very panic, and he started to shout to the other villagers that I'm such an unfaithful wife that his father was so ashamed so he hang himself, and I was responsible for his father's death. Soon, all the villagers captured me, after I was whipped, they took me to this place where they usually use it to burn a witch!!!

Yes, they called me by many terms from witch, fornicator, etc that I did nothing but to seduce all the men in the village with my magic spell and for it, I should be BURNED AT THE STAKE!!! I screamed in agony as my body was consumed by flames, I saw all the men that I slept with, they just stood there doing nothing....and that was it, I swore to myself that one day I will get my revenge, the men should pay for doing this to me!!! 



The next thing I know, I was here in hell, become this demon who feeds from men's energy. You may have heard of my name...yes...it's SUCCUBUS. The word is derived from the Latin preposition sub (under), and cubo, which is Latin for "I lie". The word succubo translates as "I lie below". 

But it turned out, even in hell I wasn't doing so well either. I was forced to marry this Ugly Demon for he has charmed by my demonic beauty. I couldn't do nothing but to marry that evil b*stard. And soon, I became a desperate housewife once again! After giving birth to our demonic son, I did what I should have done a year ago, I escaped from hell and went to the Human World!!!



I took me by surprise when I came back to this world. It was just a year in hell...but here....it's more than a thousand years already!!! The era has changed, I couldn't even recognize the clothes and the culture anymore. But one thing I do know for sure...the men always have a thing on pretty ladies. So I disguised as one, I used my old face when I was alive, and voilĂ  every night is another party for me!!! I just couldn't get satisfied with their energies...the men...so I wanted more....more...and more!!!

One day, I met this rich guy. A playboy one, just my favorite type of man to be my dinner! He's married already to this beautiful woman but he still played around without his wife knowing about his little hobby. When he spotted me, he said he's looking for a maid, I fit perfectly to be his maid. Of course I agreed, he's about to be my dinner after all (giggle) he took me to his gorgeous house, and told me that I would enjoy being here while he placed his hand on my thigh. You bet perv!!! just wait and see my dear....dinner is gonna be served pretty soon!!! 



Later that night, he came to my bedroom, yes on the first night, he just couldn't wait to get in my pants. He looked around trying to find me...you should look up here perv...I'm here....yoohoo.....when he spotted me, he shouted in fear, but it was too late when I attacked him and forced him to do it over...over...and over again until he DIED of EXHAUSTION!!! His wife busted us actually, but I just let her watched us when we were doing it until her husband died! 



Did I let her go? of course not! too bad I hate competition! Cause this is a one woman's show and that woman is ME!!!
( hee...hee...hee....hee...hee.... )


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